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An unknown screech in the dark,
Urges to run left unfulfilled,
The setting moon in the distance
Speeds ahead glowing red.

A child looks up,
Requesting shelter.
Her soft voice dripping
with malicious foreboding.

Compliance,
But not into one's own,
Instead into the homestead
Of some old stranger.

A small room
Wallpaper peeling
To reveal rusted bricks.
Alone with the child,
Pale sharp fingers shut the door.

Awkward silence
As hairs stand on end.
Shocked stare frozen face
Eyes following all movements.

Fluid oozing from above
Dripping down on the tenants.
As the door creeks ajar
Wishes for eyes to open
And reveal reality
Go unheard
And the gravity of the situation
Becomes all too clear.
©2009 ~Chikami-chan
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I tried.. I dont think it worked too well... I guess my real dreams are scarier...

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:icongo2-chan:
well I liked it. =3

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:iconchikami-chan:
yay thank u ^^

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The road to stupidity is paved with good intentions. :D :D

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:icongo2-chan:
welcome.
I now expect horror typey stuff. =3
please please!

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:iconchikami-chan:
What u want more?

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:icongo2-chan:
yup yup.
I like horror from time to time. and it appears (to me anyways) that
you write it well. please more?

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:iconchikami-chan:
sure.. ill have to think of something, what do u prefer, poetry or prose?

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:iconsculptarexdexfrumuse:
This caught my eye. Perfect writing of a dark dream scene, and the words are really well made and have imagery, congratulations. You definitely have a way with words. Beautiful description. I really loved this...The way you wrote is beautiful, the words on how you spoke. I felt was rich and intreging.
:iconchikami-chan:
thanks you so much! Im happy I achieved some what of the affect I was going for. Narratives are not quite my style so I wasnt sure how it was going to go. I felt it didnt live up to my other poem of this type though... That one was much more grotesque.

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:icongo2-chan:
prose please. =3

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